Hmmm...

Pen: Honestly, this felt like a verse someone who thinks vocab and imagery wins topicals. Your story line wasn't that creative, and I am sick of seeing an ending being someone dying. Overall, not very creative, only thing that was decent was vocab, but it didn't really fit the verse. Overall, your verse just felt forced the whole way, and nothing that creative.

Solo: Nice approach. Not extremely creative, but not too bad. I liked the emotion too. Your vocab felt forced as well, but not too bad. Imagery can be improved, but overall I think that your creativity won this for you.

v- Solo

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