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Old 07-10-05, 09:58 PM   #9
MiSk
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Voted For: Wes City

Wes City...ya opener was a little weak and ya closer was self glory... other than those two things ya bars were hard hittin'... they flowed really good and ya structure was really good....
best bar:
this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent
gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge
worst bar:
ill run you over and drive over your heat
im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREETZ

Streetz...ya was also a little weak... ya closer was sttttrrrreeeettccchhheeddd... so was most of ya bars... makin bars that stretched ruins the punch, flow and structure to the whole verse... ya punches were good but ya have to work on the structure

*No hate just honest opinion*
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