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Old 07-10-05, 10:18 PM   #16
Dervla
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I Like the beat...The way you approach in the first verse with the multi'z is nice. Decent Flow. Lyrics..Good, Good. I'm liking the wordplay. Ok when you rapping and the chorus I think overlaping is decent.

2nd verse

Alright still I'm liking your flow. Nice lyrics. Hmmmm To me nothing stood out. Except the flow.

3rd verse lol @ angelo. Alright I'm likeing the wordplays. Again with the multi'z.

Ovrall= This was a good audio, alots of good wordplays and decent flow. Loving the chorus. And the mulit'z is decent.

Keep doing you.
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