dat u pickin da mic up on da intro??? intro is ite... bit bland n emotionless in ya voice... nice beat.. u need to vget a stand for ya mic n pull it back from ur mouth.... dats y its fuzzy... ya flow is abit choppy actually its really choppy.. emotion lacks abit delivery sounds abit stuttery... ur lines ir too long structure ur verse round da beat... its cool n its nice u did a dedication just bein real wit u on da actual song makin