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Old 07-11-05, 06:02 PM   #2
TitoBronsky
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the beat is hella dope........ lyrics was on point...

the only thing i can say as far as advice is solidify your flow....... if that makes sense..... cuz the rhyme scheme is tight..... just the delivery could be polished.... you know? other wise this track was dynamite.... the vocals on the bridge... was that you? cuz that was a nice hook ....... hey if theres room on this track let me know something..... this is gonna be dope when you finished wit it..

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