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Old 07-11-05, 07:09 PM   #13
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I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
***doesnt rhyme..... No point in this.... 0/10
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
***WTF Barely rhymes..... 1/10
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
***What? so you'd get your ass kicked by a handicap? ok 1/10
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.
***Very weak closer 0/10

Total 2/40 ok.... you need grow a brain and start spelling shit correctly.... your writing reflects a 3 year old.
you flow like a dried up river.
Please shut the fuck up.... i dont know how you one 2 battles.... you have a problem with what im saying.... holla at me and we'll sort it out in a battle...

Xeed.... your first line beat him..... but that christianity line wasnt needed.... Think your lines through..... the line may offend people....think before you write ok.
i liked that darth vader line it was pretty dope.

peace.
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