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Old 07-12-05, 07:37 AM   #16
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Man...........please......RhymnSicC.. what was that...
Be real with yourself. 1. Your a white kid pretending to be black on the net. 2. Some of those lines didnt even rhyme. 3. Dont diss someone for being 14 when your probably 12. Truths hard aint it. I suggest you re-register a new name, start again and dont be so fucking gay when you come back.

Xeed, you got the right idea. Still need some elevation on writing proper set-up lines that lead to punches. And concepts aswell, think of 1 major diss per bar and word a set up line that will attack that weak point in a clever way. If you start to practice text battling like that youll be able to win some better battles.

The vote goes to (X)eed. Easily.
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