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Old 07-12-05, 09:27 AM   #4
C-Hood
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Voted For: K-Trin

Who is this cat?,c'mon,I got more wins than he got posts
This is his own battle,yet,he ain't wouldn't be able to vote
ok...first line was nice second fell off
You Neva been in the lime-light,despite ur name rhymnsikC
The Only pound this guy's familar with is found in the bakery
explain to me where the rhyme is in here?!?!
You stare face to face with death when you met ur own fans
The Claps heard at ur shows come from when ya get backhand'd
um...ok i guess


Breakdown-this verse wasn't really good...only line that was nice was your first line...try to add a lil more complexity into your verse...and stop being so elementary



k-trin u only fifteen u not ready to battle me/
I'll eat ya ass up as if u was a whopper from burger king/
um...ok ELEMENTARY
Why in ya profile da only thang it says is gone/
im guessin dats da only thang u can spell, cause u aint been in school fo dat long/
the real question is How long have you been in school?
Me battle'n u, iz lyke me battle'n a a dude dat ain't gotta head/
how da fuck u plannin on dropin yo lines if u can't spell, nigga ya dead/
haha...........<<<<<<<<<laughin at you and not wit you!



Breakdown-you talk about spelling and your verse has more spellin errors then his please explain....verse was more Garbage then.............well Garbage...

K-Trin=6 spelling errors
Rhymesic=26 spelling errors.......so you tell me who has been in school longer
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