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I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
um....and you are tryin to say what??
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
nice.................NOT
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
woah woah woah...didn't you already use somethin like this in anotha battle?? I think so....haha
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.
oooooo that was a nice finisher

breakdown-this verse was garbage like most of your other verses....i tried to tell you what to do in all these others battles you is gettin herbed in but you don't wanna take a nigga advice...how ol are you cuz you rhyme like my lil sister...this verse really made me think about if i should rap or not...that was how garbage it was...not tryin to hate but you need to elevate majorly and then come back...




claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes
"no ones iller" gives bizzare a new definition to die
ok
the kid wuz dropped at birth, and it wuz a "sick" site to see
who said you wuz ill?? bitch you believe in Christianity
haha
Like Darth Vader said "son i am your father!"
The childs droppin......... shit now much faster
haha
Lyricaly he wack,but he snaps back to act tuff to try and flip
The childs life wuz a fake and he defiines the word "SKIT"
Sick to none, like tooth decay on Gums, aint sick, you damaged, your mama smoked too many blunts
haha...


Breakdown-verse wasn't like a OOOOOOOOO but it was difinetly enuff to beat this herb...um.. the way you put them last 2 bars was kinda confusin so you might don't wanna do dat no mo...overal it was a mediocre verse

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