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Old 07-12-05, 11:19 AM   #13
Pair-A-Docks
Flyweight
 
Posts: 152
This was feedback posted for Paroxysm

IP:

Word you got this Paroxysm.....ur structure was dope and ur wording was great....as for your opponent...you did really well too sir....but parox just had a better written verse with more imagery....sorry I can't poll my vote yet....but Good Luck to you guys!