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Old 07-12-05, 12:51 PM   #2
Madik
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This piece was decent, not the best, but ok. The flows was off at points and some parts got me confused and/or seemed useless. The vocab was ok, fell down at points and the whole hipotenuses didn't satisfy me. The multies were good and the topic was common but nothings wrong with that, so keep up. 6.5/10
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