nice piece bro. The flow was good and the rhyming, although not amazing, still good and above average lines. Your topic held strong, but at points seemed to go off. Try to hold it in and keep the wording to were you only describe that one message you tryin to get across to others. The Structure was good and i enjoyed this, keep 'em comin and i'll keep givin' ya' feed. Return the favor to the O.M.'s in my sig...

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