yeh this piece was decent for real fam. the flow was real good and the structure was nice.
i got kinda baffled from when you had all that code at the end of the first verse. but it was all good though. i thought you had good use of vocab and i thought the first bar of the second verse was funny as hell. i thought this piece was a decent piece. overall i'd give it 7/8 out of 10.

Peace