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Old 07-12-05, 05:29 PM   #5
Kawn Flixx
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This was a nice drop.. i was really feelin it .. nice drop..you had nice imagery..and good emotions... nice wordplay and vocab usuage..you had nice structure...good flow... some parts feel off ...but it overall was a good overall drop..keep it up ..
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