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Old 07-12-05, 10:12 PM   #23
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.

Love it . . . both were good . . . but i have to give the edge to Fate: i like the parallel structure at the end "i am" . . . i think both of you really brought out the pen's point of view so in that sense it was a tie . . . and both of u did it differently . . . Black Queen brining out the purpose of the pen . . fate looking more at the impact. . . Still very good drop --- making it hard to vote----- but my vote goes to FATE
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