Voted For: Paroxysm

Wow. . . Gongshow u had a great drop it was precise and to thepoint and u did doa great job. . . but the story that Paroxysm brought out was nice. . . it had all elements of a great story told in first person with vivid imagery---introduction, rising and falling action, complication, crisis, resolution-- all brought out to the reader fell beautifully into place . . . . i was just impressed by both but my vote goes to Paroxysm

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FIX ur LENSES and get with FOCUS