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Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza
Aiight Man You Came Pretty Good On This On Here Bruh, Best I've Seen Out Of You, The Imagery Was Good Here Story Line Ehh, Vocabulary Okay I Felt You Could Of Use A Little Bit Of A Better Things Being You Went From Using
What They've Heard So Far From The Other Average Minds
Looking For The More Original Thought Thats One of a Kind
THen Later At The End Of The Verse
Used
But These Thoughts are Able to Be Set free at Any Given Time
Charity, Joy, Peace, Longsuffering, and Faith Can Always Shine
Over All I Think You Had Better Imagery Better Vocabulary, The Structure Was Decent Here But Don't Seperate Shit We Know When Bars Are Up, Over All Good Imagery Man...8.5/10
Nos
Ahh Man What Happen??? I've Seen Better From You Man, Your Vocabulary Was Very Basic On THis One, Not To Mention The Structure, The First Few Lines
I step back.
Move you like telepathic paralax.
Mind tricks, like metal to magnets.
Surgically implanted by battle axe.
^Not To Well Man I Felt You've Could Of Had Better Imagery In Your Verse, You Also Had Bad Structure At Parts Which Led You Downhill On This Battle, The Best line You Had Was Your Closer Man, Looks Like You Didn't Put To Much Effort Cause I've Seen Way Better Verses From You Man ..8/10
Vote:Stanza
Cause He Had Better Imagery In His Verse, He Also Had Better Structure And Vocabulary, And The Way He Expressed It Was Much More Deep Then Nos's Part Over All No Hate Nos I've Seen Better
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