Voted For: Nostradamus

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Thats The Thoughts Of Murder, Envying, Drunkeness, And Emulations
Saving Up My thoughts In Sections Like I Hade a Church Congregation
So my Thoughts That are Beyond The known Want to be Free'd
They Have to Get rid Of those Blocking The Way Such as Greed


^^this wut stood out from ya piece...am feelin that part, imagery is there and aswell emotions well done just work on transitions and also...emotions were lacking if i have to say overall piece.


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On people being eager to spend, half their wage in taxes.
Going to polititions in power mainly their raving actors.
With ample distractions, over-paid & close to tyrants.
Were the survivors, follow politics, but dont even like it.

^^wow u expressing yourself deeply on this one, emotions

Its like an irus, nailed shut but seeing through its eyelids.
Denied the right to whats rightfully ours, but we sit in silence.
Devine recitations of writings, translate to the minds of men.
Glorifying ideals, unlike truth, just important to them.


^^complexity is there, imagery is there..and emotions..


I reviewed both sides and read it twice, but ama have to go wit the person who had overall verse

V/nos

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