^^ And You are correct about "Force"...I'm liking the imagery, not looking the approach. Hmmm the concept could be better. Emotion, elevate on that. Vocab needs to be a upp, words is basic. I kept re-reading, and re-reading, and I couldnt get what your trying to say. Please explain. but over-all ok drop, just write more.

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