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Voted For: 4fil
Aiight, I gotta give this one to 4fil.. His punches wernt all that but they were enough to win. Xceed, youve elevated since I last read your verses props on the new style your using. You just need to diss him on a more personal level, do a bit of research and work out what his weakness's are and then hit them with hard disses every time. The proper way to do a punch line is like telling a joke, use 2 line bars, just like cracking a joke, first line you do the set up, and second line you execute the joke with a punchline. But the set up and the punch have to connect. Once you get good at it, you can start adding in smaller disses in the set up line just for effect. But remember you always gotta be looking for bars that will make people go DAMN.. Cause thats what wins battles. Look at how some vets like L.I. and Chrit (if you search his old battles on this site) and see how they achieve it. Then come up with concepts with equal strength in your own battles. But always be origional with your stuff.
4fil, you seem to have the punchlines worked out, just needa work on making stronger ones. But you did win this battle today. Soz Xceed, just opinion bro.
v/4fil.
Peace all.
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