Voted For: Nostradamus

Stanza- Uh, Ok I wasn't feeling your verse to be honest. You had good imagery, with a balance of vocab. The emotion could be upp a bit. Sometimes use wordplays to expand the emotion or imagery, or even both. Your approach I wasn't feeling, I see what your trying to say, but it wasn't clear...Good drop though, had a poetic Vibe to it.

Nos- Alright. I liked the approach you took and it was clear what your trying to say. The best aspect in your verse was the imagery. There was a little emotion, but still upp on that. I liked the vocab you used. Aren't really much for me to say, the imagery was decent.


Overall=Nice piece from both. In this battle I couldnt seek a big amount of emotion in you 2. So I'll vote on imagery and the piece that's clear more what it's saying. I'mma have to vote for Nos. Stanza Nice verse but your imagery wasn't good, it was just average keep it up and elevate. Nos Congrats, you had a nice versre with decent imagery i can actual see what your trying to say.

Uh yeah...Return a favor by putting down a honest vote in my battle with drakel.

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