Rastafari Walk Tall
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Voted For: Nostradamus
Damn...........this battle was deeep fam...
Stanza,I liked the way you approached the topic, but well quite simply i read NOs' first....stanza your structure was concise but was still stretched to me, Also i felt some of your concepts didnt work or dlow like the first 2 linez in 4th verse ending in congregation, i felt the message there was just confused and it didnt flow nicely....stanza your vocab was cool, but ma nnigga u had Nos talking bout "telepathic paralax" come on nowdats on sum canibus type level...i always look for outsstanding lines in pieces your line was:
"Looking For The More Original Thought Thats One of a Kind "
but this was not as thought out and allegorical as nos':
Its like an irus, nailed shut but seeing through its eyelids.
dope battle fams....but i gotta go wid nostra,,,,Peace
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