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Old 07-13-05, 09:35 AM   #8
K-Trin
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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Just"read"the"ink",thats how much you get from"Pen N Paper"
Ya ryhmes are wack,So dont think we'll "Quote them Later"
^^OK.........5/10
This dude got no life,just check the post by this cat........

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Originally Posted by Pen N' Paper
i got 2500 posts in 1 month how bout that
^^^I think he got it by post transfer
His "punches" never "hit" hard,Cuz the boy got "soft hands"
The dude live in "Miami",No wonder he can never finda "land"
^^^Not really a punch

Ur punches were weak.I see your at least attemptin wordplay.But ya not executing it hard enough.Get rid a these('') things.Just fucks up the structure.Try to have more personals that hit.The perosnal you had didn't hit because it's obivous he got a transfer or sumtin.It's impossible to get 2,500 posts in a month.

…cezar like Julius Caesar wit a lyrical knife in his stomach and leave him ruptured
Trust him that all he does is get D/R votes cause he can’t flow and build a structure
^^1st line was gangster talk...2nd was basic
Ill handle any situation, while cezar is pussy just quick to give a fucking explanation
Ha! u PMed me bout how u were gon win, kid really are u on some drug medication
^^^Aagin.....basic
Cuz ur hallucination brings u too occur words… ?u’ll end up in RV coffin
Kid u actually think u gon remain in here man?... who cezar? Man u already forgotten
^^^Basic

Ur verse was very basic.I can understand coming weak....but not in newb mode.U didn't have any wordplay or shit.Ur set-ups were the worst.U made this battle closer than it should.But I think ya got it because you actually seemed to diss.

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