Voted For: E.C

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.
^^didn't rhyme...not a punch
i kill whack mc's like you,my job,true lyricist
kill all in my path,crime scene,no witnessess
^^^self glorified
on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic.
^^^weak
true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle
^^self glorified
we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will
^^^Self glorified

Okay...here wat.Learn wat a punch is.And drop alll that stupuid self glorifing bullshit.Focus on dissin the other guy and that only.Save that makin urself look good shit for Open Mic.It's all about wordplay and metas

Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,
^^OK..........didn't set it up good though
you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,
^^^^OK.....again...didn't like set-up
i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,
^^^umm.....mediocre
so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,
^^^Nah...more like gangsta talk here
i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand
^^OK........

Not that hot.Kinda boring.But you actually had punches and attempts at wordplay.Work on your set-ups to make your punch hit harder.And while Optik had self glorification....you had gangsta talk.Save that for Open Mic.

Vote-E.C.
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