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Old 07-13-05, 03:49 PM   #37
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Voted For: Tony Green

vote-Tony Green

TG:
your verse was ok overall...structure was kinda off though...coulda worked on that and re worded the verse over..punches were pretty good...vocab was ok coulda through in some better vocabulary...personals were aght work more on that....opener was kinda wack tho and closer was good...

just keep workin on your skills and youll get on point...nice drop...

Fate:
your verse was pretty similar to TG's....structure was not there aswell....flow was good....punches were'nt has hard hitting has TGs...vocab was good though...personals were aight but kinda lacking....opener wasnt there i wasnt feelin the whole eating you thing...closer good tho

keep workin on your shit aswell this was a close battle but i give it to Tony Green

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