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Old 07-13-05, 05:03 PM   #12
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Voted For: C-Hood

C- Hood got this one
Vocab --- C-HOOD-- y ? u may ask Mc Mystique started two lines with the same words "face me" and i know he wasn't aiming for no parallelism cause you need three and only three to do that . . .
Structure-- Both need help but C-hod got that--- easier to follow------ lines are little stretch but they went somewhere--
Whcih brings me to word play and punches C- Hood got that , however i was expecting something more creative than "Yo Mama" jokes -- but thats just me-- u still had some very funny lines especially the "kiss u goodnite" --
Overall c-hood took this one
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