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Old 07-13-05, 05:08 PM   #14
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Voted For: Chaos

Mike McGuire

I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated
Imma kill you in this here battle
You an your lines should be cremated.
^uhm okay opener, no punch though

Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man
Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan.
^thats quite nice punch, okay wordplay

Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.''
You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner.
^again good wordplay formed into punch

This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004
You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4.
^uhm no at first line, bleh @ second one


Chaos

Its Murder When Some Herb Like Dis Step Through The Door...
Cuz I'm Not Playing When I Say I'm Not Here To Baby Sit A 6 Year Old GIRL...
^haha, nice opener, made me giggle

Ya Flow Must Be Weak,..Str8 Outta Pussyness You Don't Roll Deep Wit Heat...
You Stay Undefined,...Like Gun Shoots Goin Off On A WHITE PERSONS STREET...
^hey hey, got anything against white people dude! Haha, nah but good punch here

Your Fresh From The "LOW RANKS" But Still Gotta Alot To Work On In Life...
I Know Its Hard When You Sit Down To Write And Wondering How I Got YA WIFE...
^coo coo, keeping consistent with em

We Don't Wanna Hear Your Wackness,...Strobe Should Give Me The Win Please "STOP DIS"!!!!.....
Cuz I'm Crazy..When You See Me Like The Grim Reaper How I'm About To SEAL HIS COFFIN...
^nice wordplay here formed into a punch

I Know He Just A Little Fella,...He Ain't Gonna Do No Harm...
Dis Was A Easy Win,...Like Jason Kidd Throwing Out His ARM...
^nice closer right here
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