Dope drop man dis was a very emotional piece i can tell you took ya time
dis piece seems like your depressed but dis is a dope piece nice creativty, nice use of vocab, nice structure, by da way ma favorite pieces was chapter 1 beacause it was very deep intro and i liked it. and chapter 4 cuz it gives off a flashback type feelin. but all chapters were dope.
so i give dis a 10/10

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