Thread: L.I vs. TrooP
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Old 07-13-05, 07:46 PM   #14
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Oops, anyways here's my breakdown on troops.

Li's a Vet? Ya that Fell Off..8 Linez.Neva seen u SpitTin 10
Flyweights. "Respec" You cuz your Rv's only "Senior" Citizen
if your refering to a spectical line, as in those one eye glasses things, then this is a played out line, and the personal hardly hit
Ya Knowledge turnt Garbage..If i Lose.They polled all Wrong
Damn LI you Been here So Long..u Need Assistance 2 Log On
too simple, personal didn't connect
Your Far From Hood Last Time you Seen White..U was Ashy
LI Couldnt Stick Out if His Name was Switched with his Avy
decent, simple but decent, the personal connected a bit
Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"
this was "meh", try not to use quotes that people said and take a part of it and make it rhyme in your line, it's wack, but this was from the member title and was almost a decent personal

This battle was close actually, anyways, i'm just giving feedback not voting.
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