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Old 07-13-05, 08:29 PM   #102
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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

Jacks:
your verse was good overall....structure was good...flow was nice...vocab was used good..punches were lacking though and personals were aight....opener was bad and closer was aight

overall-good

Ktrick:
your verse was decent(i guess)....flow was not bad...punches were bad and personals lacked...vocab was good though(shocking)...opener was aight could been worded better and closer was not that good either....

overall-decent...more towards weak...

good battle...not