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Old 07-13-05, 08:39 PM   #1
Chris Stylez
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Originally Posted by leady
wow... in realness dat was wank mate

& i hope leady got da receipt 4 hiz vocalz, cuz he needs dem ''returned''
need a little style in voice, dissin RAW Wuz ur choice....
ur [rap] shitz ''pushed-in'' lyke a gay-asshole when its 'Moist''

i mean come on now kid.... first line is stupid and makes no sense cos ur voice is ur voice its a natural feature dat cant be taken away from u nore can u cmhange it.. dats a wasted line allready... second line... well doesnt even attack me at all... n da 3rd well its badly worded, its forced and also played.. and it makes u sound like ur gay...

ur rhyme scheme was basic as fuck, ur rhymes were simple and ur concepts played n badly worded.... really dis sucked... n funny ting is... your still duckin me in our msn freestyle dat u called me out on.. i added u on msn but u aint accepted yet... n i could beat ur entire audio roster on my own... and wats even funnier.... im makin more moves offline, dan ur entire crew will ever make online or offline



^^^ true that its like how would you know what a pushed in ass hole feel like.........u been diggin ya finger insomebody ass after they got fucked in the ass or u got ya assfucked only true way u can know dogg...........but bottem line WORK ON YA DAMN STRUCTURE. i can tell if im lookin at a rap verse or lookin at rip off of the matrix. You flow would be alot better if u had structure and and worded it better.Come up with better concepts than gay assholes.......*shudders* didnt wanna know how a pushed in asshole would feel like. anyways work on ya structure
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