Voted For: Nostradamus

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Nos:
your verse had way more imagery than ktrin did...nice structure and flowd nicley together...vocabulary was nicely used in this piece ....the opener was good even though the topic is GETTIN RAPED ....and closer was good and you kept on topic

overall-good drop

K:
you verse was aight..coulda used some work and ya got off topic once or twice....ok imagery and your vocabulary was lacking...it flowd well..your structure was aight...i got kinda bored though yours...opener was aight and closer was aight

overall-decent

good job from both but im giving this vote to Nostradamus...keep it up both of ya...~1~

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