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Old 07-13-05, 11:15 PM   #14
Adam
 
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Voted For: Maximus

Pen N' Paper
Maximus is like a puzzle…
…his lines to difficult to understand and nobody really wants to solve them
He actually thinks he good but he 16 and still has the “scared of the dark problems”
Nah...4/10
U think u good kid ive seen ur battles man and they kinda look like garbage
Max get dropped quick, kid ur embarrassing urself u sound like a garage pop artist
Multies are allright...5/10
The lines u spit will never hurt, cuz u comin close ur winnin shoes will neva work
U diss me but u tha one getting merked, cuz ur lines are just lies so it’s a Con~Verse
Meh...wordplay was allright...6/10
Im original u just borin like prequels u One Step Beyond what?... shit is ur equal
Maximus ur rhymes are tired and played out more then Freddy and Jason sequels
Meh...5/10
OSB just face it u lookin too hard… kid is not even that far…to read between bars
U get Maxed Out kid like Master Card… so take it back and see that u just a re-tard
No...4/10

Don't just use multies, sometimes it throws off the flow. Example is this battle..

Overall: 24/50

Maximus
Asking for votes? Massive hope and you'd lose with just half my post,
'Pen N' Paper' will get 'tossed so quick' you'd think I was 'passing notes,'
Liked this...good flow..8/10
Verse is weak, drop shit and same story, every thing remains boring,
Shit, I even got angry and 'ripped paper' when I was brainstorming,*
Nice line...8/10
Claim he tore me? You think that, but I got something to run by you,
PNP............ The only time you've torn 'One' was dividing one by two,
Word...7/10
Need I write more? I might whore, I lose? You're an ongoing debater,
This bitch 'Pen' wrote a diss to me, and I 'spilled inc.' all over his 'paper,'
Meh...6/10
His words are just corny, wouldn't be hard if your verses were horny,
Battling me? Why should I shit on you, when your verse does it for me...
Owned...7/10

Overall: 36/50

Nice flow in this verse man... real good drop..

Vote: Maximus