Voted For: Nostradamus

K Trin- Since you lost i'll tell you what was wrong with your verse... Man, you were saying stuff just because it rhymes, example... "Lisa,and asked her if wanted pizza.." What was that dude? Anyway... You took the un creative writing route. I saw the topic and thought what you were writing about first, therefore, you don't get points for being creative... Your verse was more laughable than anything, "he finally busted a fat nut in her eye..." Alot of your lines didn't rhyme as well, and this isn't poetry.

Nos- Nice approach on the topic. Reminds me of some Eso shit... told iteaxactly how it is honestly, nice wya to show what the industry really is, your first few lines owned. vocab was really good and just overall verse was dope man, always nejoy reading your shit. (i'm saying the pros because he won if you were wondering) I wouldn't have thought of that approach, real nice creativity... Dope verse man, keep it up

RTF

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