Voted For: Nostradamus

K-Trini
Allright..
You had the basic idea and approach that anybody could use when seeing this topic. You tried to apply some other concepts like the Romeo and Juliet, so that was cool.. I found your piece to be very basic though, the attempts at multies weren't that great because they ruined the flow of your verse. You had a lot of forced rhymes as well that you should learn to overcome to have a better verse. Also, Romeo And Juliet is a play not a poem...but other then that, good drop...just elevate a bit and you should be allright..

Nostradamus
Wicked approach to this topic. The flow was flawless through-out and you had some wicked ideas, multies, vocabulary...the whole bit in this. The last line was killer, I was feeling it.. Dope piece..

Vote: Nostradamus