Voted For: nonchalant

Kid....how do you think you gonna win writing bad rap and stuff like that...
You look FOOLISH....got Em saying, "I ain't never seen an ASS like that"..
lame.....
Kid you're all clammed up...you need to at least try to get out ya shell...
I would say that you might win...but kid there I really doubt you will...
didn't really rhyme but first line was nice
You think that you can rap kid.....well guess what...I don't believe you...
Cause honestly...your lines are as stupid...as a line for a movie preview...
um...ok i guess
You can't free-style....cept maybe wit ya clothes from the Goodwill...
Dogg your punches couldn't hit me.....even if I just stood still...
ok
Don't try to throw blows my way kid.....cause ya disses I can't feel...
How ya think you'll win.......when you can't elevate past an ant hill!
ok finisher



breakdown-verse wasn't really all that hittin...punches seem like they were thrown by a drunk dude how badly they missed...but it was ok for a newbie



Check it..i will pulverize this kid..turn his flesh into ashes
He's..runnin' out of 'shine' like a 'light bulb' that 'flashes'
nice
When he's playin 'basketball'..that's the only time he's 'runnin for the block'(reppin)
It's obvious he likes thing in 'twos'..so let's give pair-a-docks a pair-of-cocks
ehhhh.haha
It's 'funny' how he's confident battlin' me..he's a fuckin' 'joke'
Only time he fuckin' looks 'big' is if he put on two fluffy 'coats'
ok...could have been harder
I'm new to RV..but the new kid will still eat ya
Only way he's 'toppin' me if he was 'pepperoni' and i was the 'pizza'
haha...ok
To beat me is impossible...like bein' a Pussy-AndDick(pair-a-docks)
Put this dude on a 'strawberry'..cuz i 'creamed' him and gave his ass a 'whip'



Breakdown-nice verse...you got some real potential....nice punches nice play on his name too....could have used a lil more complexity to spice it up but your verse overal was pretty goood

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