Voted For: Pen N' Paper

dope battle right here y'all...

Maximus:-

Good drop, few bars could of been worded alot better...that was youre main an prolly only flaw in the verse

Wordplay was aight, nothin too complex, but it was okay, punches hit for the most part, propps on that brainstorming personal, good play off the name....wasnt feelin youre closer, that horny shit was a lil gay an seemed kinda childish, but for the most part ya verse was cool stuff man.
6.5/10

Pen n paper

decent verse, wordplay an the flow was far superior, need to work on youre punchlines a little....structure was good an easy to follow, each bar was worded a hell of alot better than maximus, good disses an personals too, ya verse was fiyah man, real nice drop.
8/10

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