Voted For: nonchalant

Pair-A-Docks [u]
Kid....how do you think you gonna win writing bad rap and stuff like that...
You look FOOLISH....got Em saying, "I ain't never seen an ASS like that"...
Rhymed that and that. Bad punch with ass like dat, decent concept though.
Kid you're all clammed up...you need to at least try to get out ya shell...
I would say that you might win...but kid there I really doubt you will...
Forced rhyme. No punch, just saying you doubt he will win.
You think that you can rap kid.....well guess what...I don't believe you...
Cause honestly...your lines are as stupid...as a line for a movie preview...
Bad punch honestly. Set up wasn't great either.
You can't free-style....cept maybe wit ya clothes from the Goodwill...
Dogg your punches couldn't hit me.....even if I just stood still...
First real punch I've seen. Kinda played though.
Don't try to throw blows my way kid.....cause ya disses I can't feel...
How ya think you'll win.......when you can't elevate past an ant hill!
Decent closer.

Overall, I see the potential, but you need to work on your wording because it keeps making your punches mere statements then a personal. Similies are bad as well. I liked some of your concepts though.

[u]nonchalant
Check it..i will pulverize this kid..turn his flesh into ashes
He's..runnin' out of 'shine' like a 'light bulb' that 'flashes'
Decent punch. Bad filler though.
When he's playin 'basketball'..that's the only time he's 'runnin for the block'(reppin)
It's obvious he likes thing in 'twos'..so let's give pair-a-docks a pair-of-cocks
Take out his name and would have flowed better. Ok punch, not that great.
It's 'funny' how he's confident battlin' me..he's a fuckin' 'joke'
Only time he fuckin' looks 'big' is if he put on two fluffy 'coats'
No. Bad punch.
I'm new to RV..but the new kid will still eat ya
Only way he's 'toppin' me if he was 'pepperoni' and i was the 'pizza'
Dissed yourself a bit here.
To beat me is impossible...like bein' a Pussy-AndDick
Put this dude on a 'strawberry'..cuz i 'creamed' him and gave his ass a 'whip'
No. Bad punch again. Decent wordplay.

Overall the potential is here as well, but you need to work on your wording and punches. They are weak, and every now and then you have a filler. I liked some of your punches.

My vote goes to nonchalant for punches. His wordplay helped a little, but his punches hit harder in my opinion.

v-nonchalant

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