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Voted For: CherryBluntZ
cherry gets this beacuse i could actually read her verse....he/she had a good rhyme scheme decent punches, aight metas....but overall solid verse....
alk-horrible rhyme scheme....played punches, stretched lines....it was a blahh verse.....you need to get a better rhyme scheme and get more creative and witty punches
v/cherry for a better verse
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