View Single Post
Old 07-14-05, 02:47 PM   #15
Wes City
in your e-dreams
 
Wes City's Avatar
 
Posts: 256
IP:

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

cherry gets this beacuse i could actually read her verse....he/she had a good rhyme scheme decent punches, aight metas....but overall solid verse....



alk-horrible rhyme scheme....played punches, stretched lines....it was a blahh verse.....you need to get a better rhyme scheme and get more creative and witty punches

v/cherry for a better verse
__________________