Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis
It aint a fight kid.. fuck ur name.. your just the type to bitch
What's the point of Pen N' Paper.. you still cant write for shit
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I'll light your spits up.. calling me out.. imaginin that you blast heat
But who gets respect by joining a battle and getting their ass beat
Nice personal.
Your in the past b.. But I did see your OM, you really rattle hoes kid
The End? You even wrote about your career after this battle closes
Decent. Personal is done man, find another.
You never rose bitch.. wack concepts, and no wordplay, just all shit
And your punches rome so damn far that the pope will call it quits
Lol, I liked this for some reason. Not really hard hitting, cuz you mostly stated he has nothing, but it's ok.
Thats all it is.. You may go somewhere, but now i easily take men
But your ink'll finally explode.. cause I have no problem breaking Pen
Nice wordplay.

Not your best work, Mim. A lot was just saying he isn't good. Still, good punches most of the time, and wordplay was nice. Personals could have been better, but other then that, nice verse.

Pen N' Paper
Mimesis think he’s cooler when he lives in Phoenix, Arizona? No concentration
He set up tha battle and still haven’t checked in? prolly in a writer’s constipation
No. Bad personal.
When he drops his verse, every1 gonna need an interpretation, cuz he’s stupid
Kid is biting lines, but still wouldn’t win even if he had a ghost writer included
When did Mim bite lines? Decent punch.
Quit talking n’ actin like u so “big” man just face it ur the size of a “midgets height”
“Mimed” his own RV Career but he really was getting his lyrics from other rap sites
I want proof of this personal.
On October 8th ull turn 17 so ill give this NET-CEE-17(NC-17) like a soft porn movie
U a vet, yesterday was ur RV anniversary so how does it feel to get beat by a RV newbie
Dissed yourself here. Wordplay was original.
He typing shit, missing punches, flow way off, structure and vocab just weak, u cant rap
Mattafact ill PM u tha rhymes before u drop cuz all u need to do is add a “C” cuz ur crap
Played concept, wording helped a little, but weak closer.

Overall, I think that your verse would have hit harder if I believed the personal bout Mim biting. I've been here almost as long as him, and I don't remember him getting banned for biting or anything like that. Work on your punches. Nothing that original cept for that wordplay.

My vote is going to Mim for more consistent punches and personals. They kept hitting, where as Pen, your's would hit, then miss, and so on. Provide proof to a personal like biting too.

v-Mimesis

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