Voted For: C-Hood

C-Hood
i got a name on rapverse...and youse an artist that's unknown/
you suck while you sober you just ok when you get in yo zone/
Bad wording and you're name isn't known either so bad personal.
my rhymes do e.z. pass and yours get stuck in a 'net' like vince carter/
so when you get writers block imma be right there to give you bars like a phone charger/ ghost writer...15 dollars a line
Bad punch. So you are willing to help him win?
listen son...i 'bear arms' like i'm missin a sleeve/
i'm real and you fake like ya moms weeve/
Mom punches always suck. This battle is between you and him, not you and her.
i know ya moms....you lucky she good wit her neck from the front/
and the only reason why you not livin on the streets is cuz i payed for the rent this month/
Another mom punch, fake personal cuz you don't know her. Mediocre punch.
and she lonely so i might be over there tonight/
and when she get done wit her mouf she gone give you a kiss goodnite/.ehhhhhhh
Wtf? Stop with the damn momma punches.
you got 3 posts and think that you can deal wit a vet/
forget gunplay wit 'techs' imma have a 'tech' put you together like 'lego set'/
Forced multis and you aren't a vet. Bad personal.

Overall, you need to work on your wording. Stop with the fake personals and momma punches. I didn't like anything in your verse.

MC Mystique
With lyrics as bad as your verse,rv.com should have you banned, How the hell you gotta pussy an still be a man?,
I'll leave you under white sheetz lookin like the klu klux klan, You keep trying ta face me with your lyrics at mass,
Bad wording and forced lines. Trying to cram too much in there.
But i know your a fan so i'll autograph ya bodycast, Ya whole cliques done faced me, face it b you cant touch me, Face it you couldnt beat oprah winfrey, Let aside the fact im bout to set your soul free,
You need to work on your structure. It is hard to see where you want to rhyme. Self glorification and forced multis.
Sry to tell you but you didnt come close to ya rapping dream, Instead you wake up everymornin look into the mirror an scream, You a homo son sit down an lisen, Ima let of 2 clips an aint one bullet gonna end up missin
Which is impossible. Bad punch and played concept with bullets.

Overall, your structure is screwed up, and your lines are really forced. Try breaking them up like what I did for it. It is easier to read and looks neater. Punches were bad, no real personals, and a lot of self glorification.

My vote goes to C-Hood because he actually threw punches, and even though they were weak, they still hit somewhat.

v: C-Hood

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