First of all, i'd like to say, that last line was gay as hell since i'm hispanic. Your flow was good but it switched up at the end and took it off road. The vocab was good and the multies is basically the only thing that let it flow. The structure was good, but the who bitches rhyming thing is played out. Your first four lines were your best ones and dat's dues to your metaphors and similies. Keep it up and return the favor to the O.M.'s in my sig.

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