The flow was ok and the vocab was descent. The whole topic got played out after eminem did it in his criminal song. I did enjoy this though, don't get me wrong, but i got confused after i got to the character switch in the third verse. It had good story telling and the whole thing was a good piece. The only thing was that you talked about the whole ciggars too much...keep it up tho. Return tyhe favor to the Open Mics in my sig.

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