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Old 07-14-05, 07:04 PM   #27
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Spul
Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself
Not that big of a punch, but ok.
I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film
Haha, I liked this. Not a huge punch, but pretty funny.
Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back
LMAO. Nice punch.
Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?
Nice punch. Hit hard.
Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face
Haha, nice flip on the otherwise killing aspect of your punches.

Overall, I think you went with trying to be funny, and your punches suffered because of it. Some punches hit hard, some didn't hit at all. Try some more wordplay.

Verbal
Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!
Fake personal and the punch could have been a lot harder. Hit somewhat.
Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!
Filler, punch was kind of funny, but just didn't hit really hard.
Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!
Statement and old personal. Different wording could have made it a good punch.
Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''
Self glorification, but the punch on the 2nd line hit a little.
my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!
No. Nothing was right in this bar

Overall, I think that if you had spent more time in your wording, then you could have won this battle easily. But, your punches, though more consistent, didn't hit nearly as hard as Spul's did. I liked the pen line, but that's about it.

My votes goes to Spul for harder hitting punches and personals. Both of you need to work on wordplay though.

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