Voted For: (X)eed

(x)eed wins.....

pretty funny opener.......
that afv's line was funny
and that "go out the door that you came in was a bit bullshit but it was quite funny and effective
from about line 8-14 was a bit crap but then your last line picked it up a little

mc mystic...... You have NEWB written all over your face...
Just having mc in your name makes you look and sound like a newb...... and having the fucking // shit at the end of your lines just fucks you up even more!!!!!!!! get you shit sorted.... you have no wordplay.... your lines are crap....... peace

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