Voted For: 4fil

The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
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good opener fil but didnt you already use this line 1nce before...any wayz great opener
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
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haahah good werd play..but i think you used this line as well before... ahh dunno
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry
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lmfao..... good stuff here fil ... good wer play

overall vote has to go 2 fil he takes this out wit ease..... Frost you wack.... nuff said..

Fil took this overall wit Punches. ..lol which were hard
pretty good flow and structure..
aiight vocab... << but you could wrk on it and get way better... good stuff fil...

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