1st dude good quality, dub volume could be down a tad, flow is a lil off sometimes, kinda basic flow doe, voice aint bad, deleivery is basic too

chorus needs to be dubbed more and made more powerful too basic sounds like a verse

2nd dude need to work on a flow, u can tell u record each bar seperate, it breaks up alot and u can tell, messes up flow
lyrics good. voice ight, quialty needs to be upped

beat koo

7/10
holla

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