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Old 07-15-05, 02:16 AM   #3
Kawn Flixx
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This was a decent drop..it could have been alot better...some lines were alittle simplict to me..you could have used better wording..and vocab usuage..maybe some punchlines..would have been good to ....you had acouple good personals that were pretty good... structure was okay... could have been better... Overall this was a pretty decent diss om..could have been better if you used some meta's and hard punchlines ..but it was overall good..keep it up
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