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Old 07-15-05, 07:30 AM   #27
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Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 195
From: Trinidad
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Voted For: K-Trin

T is outta luck.. it's simple.. nobody likes you, just now seeing ya fucked
Cause you're only giving the "Ooohh," K.. when people agree that you suck
.^^^Basic concept.....
Stuck in punches.. fuck your crew.. you gettin more rep then you should
But you're giving ME a Reality Check?..
..Man, you still think that you're good!
^^^Basic....there's no complexity....
Everybody knows I could kill you.. just admit you got nothin on me
Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
^^^suck/vacuum lines are played as fuck...
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
So just get your mind out the gutter.. right after you stop living there
^^well....this seems to be your best punch

Ur punches were pretty basic.Aside from the last one...the rest was played out concepts.Vacuum/suck?c'mon man.His profile does say reality check...but you could come up with something more complex than wat you did.It seems you didn't even spend time working on it.Where was decent wordplay?Only one line had decent wordplay and that was last.


47 wins eh?yeah,cause you be spewin like groups a queers in the grass
You farewells reminds me of geography class,cause all I hear is AT-Las!!!
^^Nice concept.....but stetrched out.....
Like trippin in the 100 meter dash.........you embarrisin ya own race
Jewlery with ur intials imprinted s' how you get M-braced
^^Nice wordplay on 1st line and nameplay in second
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him
^^should have switched around so 1st line was punch and 2nd was set-up.But nice punch

This was a good verse.Every line in it had some sort of worplay in it.This is what you gotta do.Just learn to flow better....and you a vet.Only multi was last bar and that was pretty basic.The last bar had played wordplay in nose/knows.But the rest of wordplay was fresh.My opinion......Mimesis got raped.

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