Thread: (X)eed vs 4fil
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Old 07-15-05, 08:23 AM   #26
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From: Trinidad
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Voted For: 4fil

Kid punches like real estate cause you’ll pay if they land
When they spinning your roof..... that’s when you get fans
^^Nice meta........
Just face the facts boy...... you’re only in this battle to lose
Calls himself (x)ceed........ Named after the brand of shoes
^^^Lmao!!!....dope punch...
Your boxed in like your “(x)” as if I’m coming in to stormya
When you accept your trapped... now eye come to cornea
^^OK.........
I know that you bite........ you even bit one of my own lines *proofs at the bottom
He cheats and I still manage to merked him 1....2....3 times
^^WOW.....this is just amazing...you killin him..Dope!!
And after those three times... I hope you came to realizes
That your only chance of winning is if you go and plagiarise
^^meh.....ight I guess

This was a hot verse.Nice metas and personals.You best line was the one about bitin and beatin him 3 times.Wat really made it hit though....was that you provded links showing proof.Only line whack was probably last one...but other than that...good job.

Wishes to 4fil dreams, but all he does is 4fil his own wackness
Hes followin the narrow ray of light, while hes in Blackness
^^^Too basic.....
wouldnt 4fil nothin' even if i gave you a bucket wit half water,
his bars are stuck............. like 4fils rhymes were outta order
^^^using the word 4fil too much...and whack punch
he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness
^^^Stop...you using this whackness lines too much and they suck
"wackness meter" "fillin" up to its maximum
ohhhhhh shit its over filled hes got a good can of ass whippin
^^^whackness again.....say sumtin new.
he wouldnt get any bigger even if CAPS LOCK WAS LEFT ON
"refresh" your memory, as your page might not "respond"
^^^NO......

U need to really up ur punches up to the next level.U were sayin too much about whackness and 4fil.They were whack and ya just kept sayin it ova and ova again.Work on metaphors and wordplay.If ya need an example...well..LOL...real 4fil's.

OOh...and you really Indian?If so...then wat country ya from?I'm Indian too and I'm from Trinidad.

Vote-4fil (killed him easily)